Thaddeus, so far I've only read the first half of the story, but I'll be back for the rest. I love it. You've done something new and very interesting in the way you've handled time travel. I like that you've slid in Bradbury's "Butterfly Effect" as a cautionary for the time traveler. I also love the sadness and then the joy as he sees his seemingly immortal younger self as he, in his own time, is trapped in a bloated, diabetic body.
Thaddeus, so far I've only read the first half of the story, but I'll be back for the rest. I love it. You've done something new and very interesting in the way you've handled time travel. I like that you've slid in Bradbury's "Butterfly Effect" as a cautionary for the time traveler. I also love the sadness and then the joy as he sees his seemingly immortal younger self as he, in his own time, is trapped in a bloated, diabetic body.