Thaddeus, so far I've only read the first half of the story, but I'll be back for the rest. I love it. You've done something new and very interesting in the way you've handled time travel. I like that you've slid in Bradbury's "Butterfly Effect" as a cautionary for the time traveler. I also love the sadness and then the joy as he sees hi…
Thaddeus, so far I've only read the first half of the story, but I'll be back for the rest. I love it. You've done something new and very interesting in the way you've handled time travel. I like that you've slid in Bradbury's "Butterfly Effect" as a cautionary for the time traveler. I also love the sadness and then the joy as he sees his seemingly immortal younger self as he, in his own time, is trapped in a bloated, diabetic body.
Thaddeus, so far I've only read the first half of the story, but I'll be back for the rest. I love it. You've done something new and very interesting in the way you've handled time travel. I like that you've slid in Bradbury's "Butterfly Effect" as a cautionary for the time traveler. I also love the sadness and then the joy as he sees his seemingly immortal younger self as he, in his own time, is trapped in a bloated, diabetic body.