Thaddeus, I think your writing gets richer with each chapter of this beautiful story. You've done a really good job of elevating WARP AND WOOF with your excellent descriptive passage. I paused in my reading to reread this paragraph several times, "She became a murmuration of starlings and rose up in a joyous expression of movement and fo…
Thaddeus, I think your writing gets richer with each chapter of this beautiful story. You've done a really good job of elevating WARP AND WOOF with your excellent descriptive passage. I paused in my reading to reread this paragraph several times, "She became a murmuration of starlings and rose up in a joyous expression of movement and form, and when she sang, the remembered voice of Dr. Popov filled the sky, rehearsing the crimes of Oleg Tereshkova, Zmei Tret’yavich, butcher of his people. Distant wolves lifted their voices in concert. The whole world waited." I hope you're getting lots of positive feedback, because you deserve it.
Thaddeus, I think your writing gets richer with each chapter of this beautiful story. You've done a really good job of elevating WARP AND WOOF with your excellent descriptive passage. I paused in my reading to reread this paragraph several times, "She became a murmuration of starlings and rose up in a joyous expression of movement and form, and when she sang, the remembered voice of Dr. Popov filled the sky, rehearsing the crimes of Oleg Tereshkova, Zmei Tret’yavich, butcher of his people. Distant wolves lifted their voices in concert. The whole world waited." I hope you're getting lots of positive feedback, because you deserve it.
Thank you so much!