Excellent analysis! Your contrast of the more straightforward narration - which was good in itself - with what McCarthy actually wrote was a good way to highlight where his style really pops and also serves a purpose. So much of it has to do with his wordchoice and imagery. “Stakerope” - an uncommon word or maybe even a neologism that pr…
Excellent analysis! Your contrast of the more straightforward narration - which was good in itself - with what McCarthy actually wrote was a good way to highlight where his style really pops and also serves a purpose. So much of it has to do with his wordchoice and imagery. “Stakerope” - an uncommon word or maybe even a neologism that prefigures the stake of agony in his heart at the end. And then “arc of the hemisphere” and “die in darkness”. So vivid!
And I can’t help but getting a different reference for that last bit: “Die in darkness” is a phrase used in The Expanse by Belters when they’re getting ready to put an enemy out of an airlock.
Excellent analysis! Your contrast of the more straightforward narration - which was good in itself - with what McCarthy actually wrote was a good way to highlight where his style really pops and also serves a purpose. So much of it has to do with his wordchoice and imagery. “Stakerope” - an uncommon word or maybe even a neologism that prefigures the stake of agony in his heart at the end. And then “arc of the hemisphere” and “die in darkness”. So vivid!
And I can’t help but getting a different reference for that last bit: “Die in darkness” is a phrase used in The Expanse by Belters when they’re getting ready to put an enemy out of an airlock.
Interesting link between genres. Thank you Larry. You're always an encouragement and a friend.