To address the issue of the complex subject (compound or otherwise), my beverage rule is what works rules. Specifically, in today's post I refer to what Brooks Landan describes as the movement of a sentence from clause to phrase, step by step. The danger of a long subject is the sentence holds still for all those many words, waiting to m…
To address the issue of the complex subject (compound or otherwise), my beverage rule is what works rules. Specifically, in today's post I refer to what Brooks Landan describes as the movement of a sentence from clause to phrase, step by step. The danger of a long subject is the sentence holds still for all those many words, waiting to move forward. Movement within a sentence creates ease in following the meaning.
To address the issue of the complex subject (compound or otherwise), my beverage rule is what works rules. Specifically, in today's post I refer to what Brooks Landan describes as the movement of a sentence from clause to phrase, step by step. The danger of a long subject is the sentence holds still for all those many words, waiting to move forward. Movement within a sentence creates ease in following the meaning.
That makes good sense. I'll keep that wisdom close in my revisions.