This is beautiful. Absolutely, deserves to be published. Substack counts as published, but it seems a shame to limit it to only Substack. It deserves to be out in the world as far as you can throw it.
As a nitpick, do you want to place a period in the first paragraph after the second em-dash? I had to reread the first part a few times to …
This is beautiful. Absolutely, deserves to be published. Substack counts as published, but it seems a shame to limit it to only Substack. It deserves to be out in the world as far as you can throw it.
As a nitpick, do you want to place a period in the first paragraph after the second em-dash? I had to reread the first part a few times to get it, but it could be just me. Another option would be to leave out the words between the em-dashes to help with that, but this is entirely subjective.
This is beautiful. Absolutely, deserves to be published. Substack counts as published, but it seems a shame to limit it to only Substack. It deserves to be out in the world as far as you can throw it.
As a nitpick, do you want to place a period in the first paragraph after the second em-dash? I had to reread the first part a few times to get it, but it could be just me. Another option would be to leave out the words between the em-dashes to help with that, but this is entirely subjective.
Amazing stuff.
I appreciate that so much!