Have you seen the Atlantic cartoon wherein the Founders stand around a table perusing the Declaration, and the caption reads: How about we change the phrase 'some of us guys' to 'we the people?'
Anyway, I suggest that people visit a boot camp/basic training camp and hear the marching cadences, one of which went like this: I don't know, but I been told ... Eskimo ---is really cold. (I'm sure they've changed it a politically correct "whale blubber is really cold" by now.) :)
Have you seen the Atlantic cartoon wherein the Founders stand around a table perusing the Declaration, and the caption reads: How about we change the phrase 'some of us guys' to 'we the people?'
Anyway, I suggest that people visit a boot camp/basic training camp and hear the marching cadences, one of which went like this: I don't know, but I been told ... Eskimo ---is really cold. (I'm sure they've changed it a politically correct "whale blubber is really cold" by now.) :)
Lyrical. That's what I try to make my writing and what you are getting at.
Borrowing again for my writing groups, if that's ok with you.
Absolutely. I think part of this is from the one you used before, though.
Yes, part is. But not all. And it win’t hurt us to go over cadence etc again. Thanks!
Every art form seems to aspire to music. This wisdom came through just as I was needing to recieve it. Thank you and thanks for the follow!